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EllaEbony
daydreamer | 22 | ISFJ
I'm on an indefinite hiatus. ~

Shy ≠ Antisocial. ;.;

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JenitaDraws Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey nee!
I was wondering if you'd read my scene that I wrote and if you could give me some feedback?
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EllaEbony Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017
Oh I didn't even notice u posted something! Sorry I must have clicked off by mistake. ;.;
It's pretty good nee! ^^
It's pretty descriptive and not just boring dialogue and I like that it's told in the first person cause it makes it easier to connect to the main character.
There are tiny grammar errors in a few places but all in all I liked it!
It's got that mysterious feel to it and you ended with a cliffhanger.  Just the way I like it. XD
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JenitaDraws Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I noticed the little grammar mistakes hahah, but to be honest I'm too lazy to fix them right now. 
I'm glad you like it though, I wrote it in a bit of a spontanious moment.
The plan is to write short scenes like this and then add a drawing to it.
I've noticed that sometimes I'll draw something, start coloring and then never finish it, which  I really should stop doing and actually finish my shit but.. omg I need dicipline hahah.
Also, maybe I should start writing at the beginning of the story instead of somewhere after xD
Anyway, thanks for the feedback ^^
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EllaEbony Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2017
You're always welcome.^^ I'm looking forward to the continuation. 
It's a good idea to keep writing fragments that you are inspired to write at that certain moment. It comes out better that way. :)
You don't have to force yourself to write something you don't feel. 
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KmyGraphic Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Professional Filmographer
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EllaEbony Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017
Thank you! :D
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Jasperinity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017
Happy birthday! :D
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EllaEbony Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017
Thank you! ^^
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Jasperinity Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017
No problem! :3
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